as i forgot to post the peoms keng chiaw and i composed
there's two of them; an emo one and a happy one
my dear readers, i need some feedback for them .=)
#1.Insecurity
People call it a hallucination,
My heart chose not to believe.
Many times I tried to avoid,
Yet in my world, thoughts of you.
Wanting to hold you seems impossible,
And that you were hardly around.
You are here but not yet,
I’m faced only by your shadow and your back.
I felt your arms around me but they ain’t,
Hanging by the edge kills me deep inside.
The lust of having you is taking control of my mind,
Oh, this bittersweet torment.
I wish it would stop at this second but also continue,
I’m ready to hang on.
Tears may flow,
As cruel Fate and Truth unfolds.
I held on without any regrets,
But now I’m letting it go.
Please tell me that you love me at least once,
just this once will do.
#2.untitled
I smile, only for you
I love a love that's exclusively for you
standing here under the rain,
and loving you regardless of any pain.
reaching out for your hand,
and hopefully never let it go.
with you i yearn for eternity,
inseparable like that of the sand and the sea.
without any doubts,
i'm willing to believe you totally.
without a word,
i embark on this love so blindly.
i can and i will bring this love far,
with you holding this spot in my heart.
never be replaced for the moment,
As its a love built to last.
I love a love that's exclusively for you
standing here under the rain,
and loving you regardless of any pain.
reaching out for your hand,
and hopefully never let it go.
with you i yearn for eternity,
inseparable like that of the sand and the sea.
without any doubts,
i'm willing to believe you totally.
without a word,
i embark on this love so blindly.
i can and i will bring this love far,
with you holding this spot in my heart.
never be replaced for the moment,
As its a love built to last.